OOC: Legion Generation - Revision history

Law at 10:35, 1 February 2018

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‎Stage 1: Creating Your Primarchs Indentity

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‎Stage 4: Spend Attribute Points

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‎Stage 4: Spend Attribute Points

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‎Stage 4: Spend Attribute Points

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‎Stage 4: Spend Attribute Points

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‎Stage 6: Submit your Character Sheet

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‎Stage 4: Spend Attribute Points

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 '''5-8 Ranks = Specialized/Good'''<br>
 '''9+ Ranks = Exceptional/Amazing'''<br>
 Only the strength level will be visible to other players. Note that these bandings are from the view of Primarch, so whilst a Competent or Average rating might seem unimpressive it's relative to other Astartes or Xenos.

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 ==Stage 1: Creating Your Primarchs Indentity==
 Your Primarch is your avatar in the game and who you will be roleplaying as when interacting with the other players. As such you will need to think about the Primarchs motivations, their prejudices and their vices. You should consider their upbringing on their homeworld after being cast across the galaxy and the inevitable meeting with the Emperor as he crusaded across the stars.
 ===Description===
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 But a part of their personality should be a negative Vice, such as Jealousy, Bitterness, Prejudice, Rage, Pride, Stubbornness, Hubris, Overconfidence.
 Remember that Primarchs with interesting Flaws are the most fun to interact with.
 ==Stage 2: Create your Legion Identity==

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 Your specific ranks will not be visible to other players, however an indication of how strong/weak different attributes are will be common knowledge. It would not be difficult to for a Primarch to fathom where another Legions rough strengths lie.
-A rough guide to how the Attributes are banded according to strength as below:<br>
+A rough guide to how the Attributes are banded according to comparable strength as below:<br>
 '''0 Ranks = Incompetent/Terrible''' <br>
 '''1-4 Ranks = Competent/Average'''<br>

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 '''9+ Ranks = Exceptional/Amazing'''<br>
-Only the strength level will be visible to other players.
+Only the strength level will be visible to other players. Note that these bandings are from the view of Primarch, so whilst a Competent or Average rating might seem unimpressive it's relative to other Astartes or Xenos.
 Below is the list of Attributes available to spend points on.

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 ==Stage 6: Submit your Character Sheet==
 Once all the above details are complete you can submit your Character Sheet to the GM for final approval, from this they will do the administration required to put your Legion into the Game.
-From their it is then time to create your Public facing Wiki page which will show off your Legion to the other players.
+From their it is then time to create your Public facing Wiki pages which will show off your Legion to the other players.
 Remember to include things such as your Legion Colours, Logo, and other details evocative of your Legion.
+You advised to create a Wiki Page for Your Legion, Your Primarch, Your Homeworld. Then, once unlocked Special Characters.
 ===Examples===

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 Below is the list of Attributes available to spend points on.
-For more details on what each attribute does then please refer to the Attribute Guide page:
+For more details on what each attribute does then please refer to the Attribute Guide page: <br>
 '''[[OOC: Attributes]]'''

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 Below is the list of Attributes available to spend points on.
-For more details on what each attribute does then please refer to the Attribute Guide page. <Link>
+For more details on what each attribute does then please refer to the Attribute Guide page: [[OOC: Attributes]]
 '''PRIMARCH'''<br>