Legion IX: Storm Jaws - Revision history

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==Unique Formations==
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==Combat Doctrine==

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=Primarch=

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=Culture and Beliefs=

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*'''Espionage=''' Espionage indication
*'''Aggression=''' Aggression indication
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=Notable Members=
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[[Primarch Name]]Shiniest of Shiney, The Shiney Lord 
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	The Storm Jaws are ferocious warriors, driven to seek out and defeat the strongest opposition so they might consume them and absorb their mana, raising their stature with their primarch. Proud of their tribal heritage, it shapes their appearance and the way they fight.		The Storm Jaws are ferocious warriors, driven to seek out and defeat the strongest opposition so they might consume them and absorb their mana, raising their stature with their primarch. Proud of their tribal heritage, it shapes their appearance and the way they fight.
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-|Numeration= Legion Number in Numerals
+|Numeration= IX
-|Primogenitor= Name of your Primarch
+|Primogenitor= Ranagatira Toki Momoa
-|Cognomen= Old Legion Names
+|Cognomen= Storm Blades
-|Observed Strategic Tendencies=  Stuff your Legion Does
+|Observed Strategic Tendencies= Explosive hand-to-hand assault from cover.
-|Noteworthy Domains = Homeworld Name
+|Noteworthy Domains = Taranga
 |Allegiance= Fedelitas Constantus
-|Colours= Name of Colours
+|Colours= White and dark green
-|Quote= “You should insert a cool quote here <br>  -Attributed to Steffan Mensikov <br>When writing this article
+|Quote= “They're just gonna kill ya! <br>  -Attributed to Toki Momoa
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+The Storm Jaws are ferocious warriors, driven to seek out and defeat the strongest opposition so they might consume them and absorb their mana, raising their stature with their primarch. Proud of their tribal heritage, it shapes their appearance and the way they fight.
 =History=
-== Part 1 Name ==
+== Part 1 Pre-Primarch History ==
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+Before the return of their Primarch the legion were called Storm Blades. Though their geneseed gave them a propensity for great physical strength, and telepathic communication, they lacked appropriate combat doctrine to take advantage of these attributes. Consequently, the Storm Blades were not a well regarded chapter, often relegated to less important deployments.
-== Part 2 Name ==
+== Part 2 Arrival of Primarch and Re-forging of Legion ==
 = Legion Organisation =
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+As a legion the Storm Jaws are shaped by the tribal island society, built by Toki on Taranga, from which they draw their recruits. Recruits are taken from the elite warrior groups that dominate the tribal society. The Legion fight in larger squads than standard doctrine. The islanders fight in 100 man groups called Hapu, led by the strongest warrior who is given the honorific Ranagatira (meaning Chief). Recruits from a Hapu that are selected to be marines and survive the process form a single unit of indeterminate size (typically between 20 and 40), having fought together their whole lives, led as before by a Ranagatira. While such large units might be unwieldy, the unique traits of the Storm Jaws ensure they fight as a highly coordinated, and deadly machine. Prior to a battle each squad performs a war dance with loud and aggressive chanting, originating in their tribal life, designed to intimidate their enemies and charge them with adrenaline. As marines the dance serves an additional purpose, the synchronised actions serving to telepathically synchronise them, so that they operate as if they were a single entity.==Unique Formations==
 ===Formation 1===
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 ==Combat Doctrine==
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+On the battlefield the Storm Jaws favour surprise attacks from within cover. Using their telepathic command of indigenous fauna, to ensure their stealthy deployment. When commanded to attack a squad explodes out of cover in a sudden whirlwind of force. Favouring hand to hand combat with their traditional toothed paddle clubs, and generally eschewing non-essential technology. The teeth used in the clubs are taken from the gargantuan shark-like monsters of their homeworld, and are so hard and sharp they rip through armour as well as any chain weapon. Like in their tribal lives warriors seek out the most powerful enemies to defeat and absorb their mana by consuming their flesh.
-=Legion Homeworld=
+==Legion Homeworld==
-''Main Article [[Name of your Planet or Base]]'' <br>
+''Main Article [[Taranga]]'' <br>
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+The homeworld of the Storm Jaws is an oceanic world, with an archipelago on one side of the planet, created using terrafoming technology, and occupied by a primitive tribal warrior society. The marine ecosytem is dominated by several species of large sharklike creatures. The Legion infrastructure is constructed under the ocean.
 =Primarch=
-''Main Article: [[Primarch Name]]''<br>
+''Main Article: [[Ranagatira Toki Momoa]]''<br>
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+Toki is a walking slab of muscle, even among other primarchs he seems large and physically imposing. Deified by the islanders, and thus his marine legion, his strength and combat prowess are strived towards by the marines. Off the battlefield his jovial and self assured attitude does not endear him to any outside the military.
 =Culture and Beliefs=
-Info Cultural Practices, Philosophies, Cults and stuff go here. ESSENTIAL
+Ranagatira Toki Momoa
 =Geneseed=
+The geneseed of the Storm Jaws endows the marines with telepathic abilities, allowing them to communicate silently on the battlefield, coordinate their larger unit formations, and dominate non-sentient life. Due to its synergy with the population recruited from the geneseed is highly stable.
 =Legion Attributes=
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-*'''Tactics=''' Tactics indication
+*'''Tactics=''' Specialized
-*'''Espionage=''' Espionage indication
+*'''Espionage=''' Competent
-*'''Aggression=''' Aggression indication
+*'''Aggression=''' Exceptional
-*'''Mitigation=''' Mitigation indication
+*'''Mitigation=''' Competent
-*'''Diplomacy=''' Diplomacy indication
+*'''Diplomacy=''' Competent
-*'''Geneseed=''' Geneseed indication
+*'''Geneseed=''' Average
 =Homeworld Attributes=
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-*'''Population=''' Population indication
+*'''Population=''' Specialized
-*'''Fabrication=''' Fabrication indication
+*'''Fabrication=''' Average
-*'''Fortification=''' Fortification indication
+*'''Fortification=''' Average
 =Exemplary Battles=
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 =Notable Members=
 '''Primarch'''<br>
-[[Primarch Name]]Shiniest of Shiney, The Shiney Lord<br>
+[[Primarch Name]]Ranagatira Toki Momoa<br>
 '''High Command'''<br>
 [[Person Name]] Title<br>