Alighieri - Revision history

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‎Names

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‎Names

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‎Primarch Attributes

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 ==Post Discovery==
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-|Text= "It has never been to clear to me if the 'Lords of Terra' are more offended by the trinkets I stole from there houses or the favours I was given by there mistress."<br> Alighieri <br>Discussing his relationship with the Lords of Terra
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 |Quote= A Legions Primarch exists to inspire, to show them the way, to make the Astarte they best they possibly can be.  Only in one case is it the other way around
-|Attribution= Attributed to the EmperorPresumably about Alighieri
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 Derogatory terms - 'the Runt'.
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 ==Biography==

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+|Quote= A Legions Primarch exists to inspire, to show them the way, to make the Astarte they best they possibly can be.  Only in one case is it the other way around
-|Text= "A Legions Primarch exists to inspire, to show them the way, to make the Astarte they best they possibly can be.  Only in one case is it the other way around."<br>  -Attributed to the Emperor<br> Presumably about Alighieri}}
+|Attribution= Attributed to the EmperorPresumably about Alighieri
 No official titles or honours.

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 |Text= Alighieri with the Huntsman rifle
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-Alighieri is only known to have one item of note - a rifle known as "the huntsman" which was given to him by his brother Linnaeus.
+Alighieri is only known to have one item of note - a rifle known as "the huntsman" which was given to him by his brother Linnaeus - apparently built to his own design ignoring Martian Orthodoxy.
 This weapons appears has been constructed in a 'retro' style with a great deal of attention seemingly paid to appearance rather then functionality.  It is adorned with wood and brass components and has a preposterously long barrel giving it a total length of one and a half metres.  It is unclear if it was named "the huntsman" by Linnaeus or Alighieri.

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	Some people have suggested the weapon is not a gift but a snub. Whatever the intent Alighieri seems to be very pleased with it and has taken to carrying it into battle with him. In typical Alighieri manner however he has ignored the fact that it is clearly intended to be a sniper rifle (it appears to share some characteristics of an Exitus Rifle) and carries it into hand to hand combat. Often shooting it one handed - and sometimes just hitting people with it.		Some people have suggested the weapon is not a gift but a snub. Whatever the intent Alighieri seems to be very pleased with it and has taken to carrying it into battle with him. In typical Alighieri manner however he has ignored the fact that it is clearly intended to be a sniper rifle (it appears to share some characteristics of an Exitus Rifle) and carries it into hand to hand combat. Often shooting it one handed - and sometimes just hitting people with it.
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 ==Wargear==
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-|Image=Huntsman.jpeg
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 |Text= Alighieri with the Huntsman rifle
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 ==Wargear==
-Alighieri has only one item of note - a rifle known as "the huntsman" which was given to him by his brother Linnaeus.
+{{Picture Box Left
-This weapons appears has been constructed in a 'retro' appearance with a great deal of attention seemingly paid to style rather then functionality.  It is adorned with wood and brass components and has a preposterously long barrel giving it a total length of one and a half metres.  It is unclear if it was named "the huntsman" by Linnaeus or Alighieri.
+This weapons appears has been constructed in a 'retro' style with a great deal of attention seemingly paid to appearance rather then functionality.  It is adorned with wood and brass components and has a preposterously long barrel giving it a total length of one and a half metres.  It is unclear if it was named "the huntsman" by Linnaeus or Alighieri.
 Some people have suggested the weapon is not a gift but a snub.  Whatever the intent Alighieri seems to be very pleased with it and has taken to carrying it into battle with him.  In typical Alighieri manner however he has ignored the fact that it is clearly intended to be a sniper rifle (it appears to share some characteristics of an Exitus Rifle) and carries it into hand to hand combat.  Often shooting it one handed - and sometimes just hitting people with it.

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	==Primarch Attributes==		==Primarch Attributes==
−	~~Please List the Bandings of your Primarch Attributes.~~
−	~~'''0 Ranks = Incompetent/Terrible''' <br>~~
−	~~'''1-4 Ranks = Competent/Average'''<br>~~
−	~~'''5-8 Ranks = Specialized/Good'''<br>~~
−	~~'''9+ Ranks = Exceptional/Amazing'''<br>~~
−	~~SUMMARY FOR REFERENCE, DELETE ONCE BELOW COMPLETED.~~

	*'''Strategic Planning=''' Average		*'''Strategic Planning=''' Average

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 SUMMARY FOR REFERENCE, DELETE ONCE BELOW COMPLETED.
-*'''Strategic Planning=''' Strategic Planning indication
+*'''Strategic Planning=''' Average
-*'''Martial Prowess=''' Martial Prowess indication
+*'''Martial Prowess=''' Average
-*'''Statecraft=''' Statecraft indication
+*'''Statecraft=''' Good
-*'''Psychic Potential=''' Psychic Potential indication
+*'''Psychic Potential=''' Average
-*'''Lords of Terra Influence=''' Lords of Terra Influence indication
+*'''Lords of Terra Influence=''' Terrible
-*'''Imperial Army Influence=''' Imperial Army Influence indication
+*'''Imperial Army Influence=''' Good
-*'''Mechanicus Influence=''' Mechanicus Influence indication
+*'''Mechanicus Influence=''' Average
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